[ID:4-6750652] 2020年湖北宜昌市中考英语一轮写作指导课件话题14 科普知识与现代技术(共2 ...
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(共24张PPT) 话题十四:科普知识与现代技术 能力篇 美 文 欣 赏 If by life you were deceived, 假如生活欺骗了你, Don't be dismal, don't be wild! 不要悲伤,不要心急! Present is dejected here; 现在却常是忧郁。 In a moment, passes sorrow; 一切都是瞬息,一切都将会过去; That which passes will be dear. 而那过去了的,就会成为亲切的怀恋。 假如你是李华,在网上看到中国Britech公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件(app)征集网友建议。请根据网上的征集信息,用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件。 情 景 呈 现 IDEAS NEEDED Britech is now designing an app that helps learners with their English writing.The app is to help learners explore ideas, organize them and write them down.Your ideas are needed! Here's what to do: Write to share your ideas! Feel free to be creative! Please let us know: 1.What's the name of the app? 2.What problem does the app solve? 3.What does the app do? Contact us at appdesign@Briteclz.com 写作要求: 1.内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥。 2.词数80~90左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。 3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。 1.have difficulty in writing写作有困难 2.how to organize ideas如何构思 3.use proper words使用恰当的词 4.solve these problems解决这些问题 5.provide sth. for sb.为某人提供某物 6.have an online course上在线课程 7.so that为了,以便 8.develop our writing skills培养我们的写作技巧 9.correct mistakes改正错误 10.offer sth to sb 向某人提供某物 11.be worth doing sth.值得做某事 1.I'd like to share … 2.Could its name be…? 2.We don't know how to… 3.I hope it can… 4.Here is my advice on … 5.The more…, the better… 6.…so that we can develop our writing skills. 7.there should be an e-teacher who… 本篇书面表达的话题是为一种写作软件app征集建议,可以从以下方面去构思本篇作文: 1.阅读征集内容信息,明确英文提示要求:设计一个帮助学习者写作英语的应用程序,能够帮助学习者探讨观点,能够组织文字并把它们写下来。让公司知晓写作软件的名字、解决什么问题以及能够做什么。 2.确定作文的基本结构:用三段表达,第一段开门见山,表达分享的愿望,告知应用程序的名字。 第二段叙述写作上存在的问题,希望解决这些问题。第三段主要写这个软件做什么,也就是设计建议,需要重点写。 3.确定时态和人称:作文叙述客观事实,用一般现在时;本篇表述自己对写作软件app的建议,用第一人称写。 4.注意高级词汇、层次词的运用,要行文连贯,条理清晰,重点突出。 Many of us have difficulty in writing. We don't know how to organize ideas, use proper words,and so on .I hope it can solve these problems. Here is my advice on what the APP does.First, it should provide some reading materials for us. The more we read, the better we write. 1.本文审题到位,书写内容完整,条理清楚,时代感强。 2.在文中使用了First,Second,Third等词汇,使文章层次分明,表达更有逻辑性,易于理解。 3.使用了I'd like to share …,We don't know how to…,The more…, the better…,there should be an e-teacher who…句型结构,使文章增色不少,是一篇佳作。 4.作者思维活跃,提出了一些创造性的建议,适应现代技术的发展需要,培养了学生创造性的思维品质。 热 身 写 作 最近,用手机APP买菜的人多了。手机菜场菜品丰富、洗净配好、预约送菜上门等,外国朋友对此也很感兴趣。请你以A New Use of the Mobile Phone为题, 写一篇80~100词左右的英语短文,介绍手机买菜带来的便利,让外国朋友了解中国人民生活中这个新变化。 参考范文 A New Use of the Mobile Phone Preparing for meals is tiring. You may have to spend hours getting everything ready for cooking. Now in China, new mobile apps are here to help. These apps provide you with meat, fish, and vegetables, almost everything you need for a meal. You can order whenever you like and decide on the time for them to arrive. If you like, they can be washed, cut and packed for a certain dish. Some apps even guide you to cook step by step, making cooking easier. Compared with the traditional way of going to the market, mobile apps save your time and energy. With such a new use of the mobile phone, you can enjoy a more relaxing life.
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